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Personal Statement

Submit a memorable piece of writing which clearly demonstrates your passion for your subject, as well as your thinking and writing skills

Trinity College Oxford

Our experienced tutors will...

  • Improve the language and grammar quality to make your writing slick and memorable,

  • Supply past successful personal statements to show you how it's done, and

  • Provide subject expertise to allow you to truly impress with your knowledge.

1. In a typical series of sessions, you will first be provided with examples of successful personal statements, both from your chosen subject and more generally, and an optimal structure will be discussed.

2. You will then be asked to discuss what attracts you to your chosen subject, and your experience with it, both in the classroom and extracurricularly - our subject tutors can recommend books and other media for you to look through and mention in your statement.

3. After it has been drafted, your tutor will help you to make improvements on it: modifying analyses of readings to make them more impressive, correcting any inaccuracies, and modifying examples to make you stand out from the pack.

4. Finally, the language and writing quality will be examined and improved, to ensure that it flows well and is enjoyable to read, and there are no spelling or grammar errors. Once this is done, it is ready to submit!

Personal Statement Package

Price:

£545

4 x 60 minute sessions, with tutoring from a personal statement expert as well as a subject specialist, so that the style and the content of your writing can be taken to the next level

To book the Personal Statement Package: 

      email us at info@avaloneducation.co.uk

      call us at +44 20 8156 4942

or simply use the buttons below!

Personal Statement Session

Price:

£145

1 x 60 minute session, so that you can have a helping hand getting started, gain inspiration for the content of your statement, or have another pair of eyes look at your writing before you submit it

To book a Personal Statement Session: 

      email us at info@avaloneducation.co.uk

      call us at +44 20 8156 4942

or simply use the buttons below!

Testimonials

Samuel

The mock interview tutoring I felt was especially helpful as it was so similar to my actual Oxford admissions interview

Dina

Working with a tutor throughout my Cambridge application meant there was someone experienced to answer my questions, and definitely was a key factor to my success

Theo

Getting A-Level tutoring, and then help throughout my Oxford admissions journey, massively boosted my confidence and made me feel really prepared by the day of my interview

Avalon Education is the nation's leading educational consultancy, helping students of all backgrounds gain offers to the most competitive courses and universities in the UK, through our university admissions tutoring services.  

 

Our select team of highly-experienced university application tutors have coached students to successfully apply to study competitive courses such as Medicine and Law, as well as to some of the most prestigious universities in the world, including Oxford, Cambridge, Durham, UCL, and the LSE. 

 

We also offer students GCSE and A-Level tutoring, enabling them to achieve the grades they need, so that they can make the university applications they want to.

At Avalon Education we have a simple mission: to help every student unlock their academic potential, setting them up for richer, more fulfilling lives. From GCSE and A-Level tutoring, to university admissions tutoring, we support students through every stage of the process, unlocking their potential and empowering them to fulfil their dreams.

 

As another university application season gets underway, I wish you all the best of luck, and hope that you choose us to help you achieve your potential. 

 

Benedict Edmonds

President, Avalon Education

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